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 A Poem (Because why not, I guess?)

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Meadowstar01

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PostSubject: A Poem (Because why not, I guess?)   Sun May 08, 2016 10:19 pm

Ever since I got on DeviantArt and it crashed my computer (or something on there did), I haven't really used it. Hence why I'm going to post this random poem right here. Meh.

This is my newest poem, although it has been awhile since I've written it. It's not for anyone in particular- It just popped into my head during class one day, so I wrote it down, and basically here it is. So yeah, this poem is called "You Are...". I would like to know ya'll's opinions on it, or if there is anything I need to improve!

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You are as the sun is on a warm spring day,
as the flowers of the returning May,
cool and refreshing as the stream on Summer's hot mornings.

You are as the rain is on a tin roof,
the cool, refreshing breath of Autumn,
the colors of many distant memories gone by before the cold.

You are as the fire is amidst Winter's bitter winds,
the flow of the constant river hidden deep within the song of birds,
and the mystifying, wondrous howl of the coyote.

You are as the sunshine is on a cloudy day,
the rose that is rested in the morning dew,
and the love that I am so lucky to have as mine.
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem (Because why not, I guess?)   Sun May 08, 2016 10:45 pm

Nice Poem! You are a good writer, I suck at poems XD
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem (Because why not, I guess?)   Mon May 09, 2016 12:11 pm

xD Thanks, Zilla! And it's okay- I'm sure you can write some pretty nice poems!
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